{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51269004","dateCreated":"1330903782","smartDate":"Mar 4, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Maddie_Whitmarsh","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Maddie_Whitmarsh","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1327467318\/Maddie_Whitmarsh-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/peaceandwarpoetics.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/51269004"},"dateDigested":1532725613,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Chris' Specifications","description":"I wanted to move these for the sake of formatting, but if you need them, here they are.
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\nPromising material here. The structure seems sound to me - though you might want to begin with a short summary paragraph. Since Marinetti is important to our considerations, you might want to develop your discussion of his friendship, and his break, with Marinetti. And, since it sounds like he stayed on the fascist bandwagon for quite a while, you might want to discuss his relation to Italian fascism, and note the relationships of other poets we're studying (especially Pound) to fascism. I'm glad for the several interpretations of his Interventionist Demonstration. Can they be framed without reference to an "our" (i.e. this class)? Remember your audience - all travelers of the world wide web. C.
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\nIn phase II you may want to refine your structure. Maybe instead of two sections - "Futurism and Fascism," "An Analysis" - three sections would suit the material better: 1) his role in Futurism; 2) his fascist loyalties; 3) analysis of individual works (extend the discussion of Interventionist Demonstration, a little, and move your discussion of "Funeral" down here).
\n(Quoted from email to MW)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51269072","body":"I didn't follow his instructions quite to a T on the second part: I don't think we have enough material on his participation in Fascism to make it its own section. From what I can glean, his fascism was only a passing thing and he quickly moved on from it. Either way, there doesn't seem to be a wealth of information on his participation in it out there. If either of you think we ought to try harder to find more, please let me know.
\nCheers.","dateCreated":"1330903877","smartDate":"Mar 4, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Maddie_Whitmarsh","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Maddie_Whitmarsh","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1327467318\/Maddie_Whitmarsh-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[{"id":"49830914","dateCreated":"1327980947","smartDate":"Jan 30, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Maddie_Whitmarsh","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Maddie_Whitmarsh","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1327467318\/Maddie_Whitmarsh-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/peaceandwarpoetics.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/49830914"},"dateDigested":1532725613,"commentId":"82841","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: specify which one\/provide a link to it?","description":"specify which one\/provide a link to it?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"a manifesto","dateCreated":"1327980947","user":{"username":"Maddie_Whitmarsh","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Maddie_Whitmarsh","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1327467318\/Maddie_Whitmarsh-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Carlo+Carr%C3%A0\/296863022?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"\u200da manifesto","dateCreated":"1328997962","user":{"username":"Sarah_Vanderpool","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Sarah_Vanderpool","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1355206191\/Sarah_Vanderpool-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Carlo+Carr%C3%A0\/300816906?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"49998684","body":"yes and yes. they wrote more manifestoes than they did poems or painted paintings","dateCreated":"1328243942","smartDate":"Feb 2, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"christopher.patton","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/christopher.patton","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1317093222\/christopher.patton-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}