{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51271024","dateCreated":"1330907528","smartDate":"Mar 4, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Maddie_Whitmarsh","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Maddie_Whitmarsh","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1327467318\/Maddie_Whitmarsh-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/peaceandwarpoetics.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/51271024"},"dateDigested":1532725234,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Beginning Notes","description":"I moved these for formatting purposes, but still wanted to make them available.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThis is well on its way! And I love that you're keeping track of references! I don't see a reference, though, for the Alliances section ... and, come to think of it, that may be more detail than you want? - you could just provide a link to that material in your &quot;External Resources&quot; section. Anyway, you have a lot of the material you need ... suggest that, next, you flesh things out where the material is thin (go back to that list of resources), and, after that, maybe open a section on the relationship between the war and the arts. (Lots of other pages - Dada, Ball, Pound, technology, and more - are going to want to link to yours.) C.<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI was curious about the direction of the &quot;Arts&quot; section, so I asked Professor Patton what other artists we should include. He said we should include Hugo Ball, specifically an analysis of &quot;Karawane.&quot; He said that the Karawane handout has some good insight as to Ball's feelings toward WWI.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nHe also had this to say about the reading of &quot;Lament of the Frontier Guard&quot;:<br \/>\n&quot;One other thought - since &quot;Lament&quot; is, as your discussion notes, close to an EXPLICIT rebuke of WWI, I wonder if it deserves such extended treatment. Where in the book is the rebuke more IMPLICIT? Think of all the desolate places, lonely women, and pompous generals. (That the first two are NOT, by and large, made desolate or lonely by war, is what makes the rebuke implicit.)&quot;<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\n-Tessa","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"51192730","dateCreated":"1330669477","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Tessa_Woods","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Tessa_Woods","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/peaceandwarpoetics.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/51192730"},"dateDigested":1532725235,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wiki Checklist, WWI","description":"Hey guys! So to help us along and to check our progress\/make sure everyone\u2019s done something for all the Phases, I\u2019ve put the Wiki checklist at the bottom of the page. I\u2019ve checked off the things that have been done for Phase I (mainly references need to be taken care of, we can all work on that). To make sure we\u2019re all getting our turns at editing the wiki, we can claim things on the checklist we\u2019d like to do by putting our names near the \u201c___\u201d and then changing it to an \u201cX\u201d when we\u2019ve completed it.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAlso, when do ya\u2019ll think we should check in with Chris to ask about another review?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}